Second rewrite here we come!

Ok, gone through the first rewrite of Kinloch 2, lots of changes but all for the better. Still a couple of sections I'm not fond of but hey this is only the start of the second pass through.

To give myself a break, I started notes for another Spartika City short story. The rainy and cold weather gave me the idea believe it or not. To balance both, I'll work on pages of one then take a break to chisel at notes for the Spartika City story. Then I'll get back to Kinloch again. I know its not the most focused approached but I think I've been corrupted by my software engineering job (aka... being forced to multitask and code on multiple software projects at the same time). I like the intro, I like the fledgling plot... I'm not sure I like them together.

Ah and still waiting to hear on the first Spartika City story AND the royalty check.. here's hoping sales were up!